I’ve hit a point in my writing that I didn’t expect to encounter. Not because it’s a bad thing, or because it’s such a good thing I never dared hope, but because it’s something I thought I’d already run into, dealt with, and moved past.
Ever hear the advice that, when considering feedback or critique, you ultimately need to do what’s best for your story to make it yours? That you can’t please all readers, and that you can’t implement every suggestion?
Until a week ago, I thought I knew what that meant. It seems simple enough. If someone says “I think you should use ‘that’ here” and you don’t want to because it ruins your voice, then you don’t use ‘that’ (like literally the word ‘that’ not a generic reference to a piece of feedback).
Also, this speaks to the wisdom of having more than one person read your work before revising. But that’s a different post.
So, what it really means, as I discovered, is people can read your book and have entirely different visions of what you meant.
Weird, right? Who knew?
I mean, besides everyone.
Or to be more specific. I got notes back from two different readers. Both of them said “This ending doesn’t work. At all. Why does it exist?” So that tells me, as much as I like my ending, it might be a problem.
But, only one of them said (paraphrasing here, but she’ll know not by much if she reads this post today 😉 ‘I hate this character and I want them to die.’
To be fair, the other also saw flaws in said character, but felt like they were fixable.
And it’s possible I rigged the votes a little bit, by saying something like “you’d never hate anyone I wrote, right?” And don’t misunderstand, I absolutely loved this feedback. Normally that kind of news would make me fly off the handle and freak out and curl up in the corner and whimper. I don’t know if it was in the delivery, or because I’ve matured as a writer – hopefully a little of both – but this didn’t hit me that way.
But suddenly I knew the true meaning of ‘you have to do what’s best for your story.’ And it had very little to do with the word ‘that’.
I had to break it down. Why was this character unlikable? Was it fixable? Was she critical to the story? Would correcting some of her less desirable traits destroy her role in the story? Did I want to keep her? Did I want to relegate her to the background? Did I want to leave her to die in Gehenna?
I know what I need to do now, btw. I haven’t figured out the details, but having to look at the story from different (not conflicting, just different) perspectives has shown me that. I just have to take the time to do it.
Have you ever received conflicting advice about changes your story needs? Like broad, sweeping, impact the entire plot changes? How did you decide what to do?
Oh yeah! But they always point to a truth – somethings needs to be changed. To fix the problem is often a bit like a puzzle that take some working out.
I often get conflicting advice. I usually sit down and think long and hard about it before jumping in and making any changes. The ones that feel right, I’ll make. If the advice makes me prickly, I tread very carefully.
Yes, many times. I can usually tell right away what rings true and what doesn’t. If I start going “Hmmm . . . what if I did this instead?” then I know that it’s probably something I need to change. If I feel that something should not be changed but in an emotionless way then I know I shouldn’t change it. I always give myself a few days to mull it over before deciding to make sure I’m not having an emotional reaction. I test a few scenarios out in my head and try to be objective about whether they would help or hinder the story. It’s a fine line. Great post!
I usually stomp around arguing with the feedback by yelling my reasons for having things the way they are at the Husband…and then I go to work. I may or may not take the suggestion, but I usually try hard to at least make a show of being objective.
Even though a number of well-known authors say “I don’t write by committee,” I usually do. I won’t change anything big unless several people comment on it. But I also occasionally edit by seniority. If I know the crit is from someone who’s a better writer than I am (agented/pubbed), I give their comments more weight.
But some thing I just won’t change. So there! 😀
LOL! I knew I’d be the only one who wanted her dead. Well, I can’t wait to find out how you fix her.