Hope at Writing with Hope, and Cassie Mae at Reading, Writing, and Loving It are hosting an amazing blog hop today.
As Hope puts it: Those kissy scenes are challenging to write, but I love reading one when it’s crafted so well it feels like I’m standing beside the characters, watching with inflamed cheeks as sparks fly between the two lovebirds.
Please share one of your favorite kissing scenes from a book you’ve read, from your own WiP, make one up, or write about one of your own memorable kisses. Then hop around to feel how sweet, romantic, or downright steamy other characters are getting smooched!
I have a decent number of favorite kissy scenes from the two pieces I recently finished, but I’ve shared a lot of them before. What I found instead is a short story that inspired a scene in one of the books. It doesn’t exist in this form in the book, but it makes more sense as a stand-alone this way. It’s a little long (about 800 words), and I apologize, but I couldn’t find a good way to cut the opening.
When you’re done here, don’t forget to visit the other blogs and check out the intensity and passion.
Rae’s face scrunched up and she blinked, trying to get some moisture back in her eyes. The computer screen glow exaggerated the shadows in the dim kitchen. It didn’t matter how many times she rearranged the numbers. The money wasn’t there.
She leaned back in the chair and stretched, T-shirt creeping up her stomach. She pulled it down when she sat up again, a chill running through her when she saw a figure lingering at the edge of the room.
Biggest drawback to this job was his house was also the office. Her lips twisted and she looked away from the silhouette. “Sorry if I’m keeping you up.”
Zach made his way to the fridge. A second glow whispered through the darkness when he opened the door, illuminating the fact he wasn’t wearing anything besides sweat-shorts. She studied his bare chest and back, looking away before the memories could resurface.
His soft reply carried in the quiet room. “I didn’t know you were still here.”
It was easier to forget what had been there before if they kept the conversation strictly business. “I thought I had the answer like, four hours ago. I didn’t want to lose the thought driving home.”
He crossed the room and set a can on the table. “How’s it going?”
She tried to ignore the tingle when his hand brushed her arm, and the tinge of disappointment when he stepped back. She took a long swallow of the cold coffee drink. It made her smile that he still knew what she liked. “Same as yesterday. And the day before. And always.”
He leaned over her, chest brushing her shoulder. “Those are the numbers?”
She nodded, glum spreading through her chest. There was no accusation in his question, but she knew it was her fault. He and his friend had this amazing game. All she had to do was make sure they could advertise, and she couldn’t. “I’m sorry.”
“Are you kidding?” he teased. “Now we only have to mortgage one of the houses. Scott’s, definitely, since mine is home base.”
She giggled. “Nice.”
He turned, face inches from hers. “I haven’t heard you laugh in forever. I missed it.”
A pulse of want raced over her and she pushed away, chair almost topping. She hoped the dim light would hide her flush. He didn’t want her. The flirting was just who he was. She wished she believed her own rationalization. “Don’t.”
The corners of his mouth pulled down, eyes sliding over her face. “Are you going to keep playing this game, or am I really the only one this is killing?”
In her gut irritation churned with regret and longing. She pushed aside the avalanche of thoughts. “I don’t know what you’re talking about.”
He crossed his arms, expression hardening. “Just make the numbers work. That’s what I’m supposed to say now, right?”
When he turned away, emptiness throbbed inside her. She licked her lips, mouth suddenly dry. “Wait.”
He didn’t turn around. “What?”
The chair’s metal casters screeched on the tile when she stood. She closed the distance between them, but didn’t dare touch him. “I didn’t…I just…I’m sorry.”
He shrugged, muscle rippling under skin along his back. “We’ll find the money somewhere.”
Her pain grew at the callous response. “Not about that.”
Zach turned, hurt on his face. “I can’t do this. You’re hot and cold. You push me away even when your body language says you want me around. I’d say this is a bad time, but I don’t think any time really works for whatever the hell it is you’re doing.”
She swallowed and stepped forward. Resting a hand on his chest, she felt his heartbeat racing against her palm; he was as nervous as she was. She locked her gaze on his. “I get that. I’m sorry. Pretenses dropped. I want you. I need you.”
She stood on her toes, brushing her lips over his. Her breath caught when he didn’t respond, leaving an ache behind her ribs.
Abruptly, his fingers wrapped in her hair, and he pulled her closer, lips crushing against hers. She whimpered and pressed into him. She felt every inch of him through her clothes, from his solid chest, to his growing arousal against her hip that called to the throb between her legs.
His free hand slid under her shirt. He growled and yanked her head back, mouth sliding hungrily down her throat.
She moaned, banishing any doubt about what had happened before or would happen after. She broke away, smiling at the question in his eyes, and pulled her shirt over her head. He tugged her back, kissing her deeply as her fingernails slid down his spine. They’d figure the details out. Later. She knew they both needed this now.
Whoa, that was hot lol. Zach sounds dreamy 🙂
Wow – that was HOT! Thanks for sharing 🙂
I’m #52 on the hop.
Yummy. How many times have I wished my hubby would do just this very thing?
ooooh! I like it. And this Zach sounds a lot more passionate than the one I’ve been reading.
Love the last lines. And your descriptions are lovely.
Nice job. Great tension before the kiss.
I’m a sucker for good characterization. Yours is great! Nice one! 🙂
Oh yeah, you just know it is going to be hot. This is a great scene, perfect tension building to the ultimate climax. Nice.
HOT and STEAMY! Great writing too! All around fabulous!
Super steamy! Love the set up and the guy being the one who wants the girl and she’s holding back, nicely done! Happy Valentine’s day 🙂
Love when lips crush together! Yummy! 🙂
This was blindingly sexy! Great job 😉
Really enjoyed the set up to the kiss. Great characters.
I loved all of this. So sexy and awesome!
That is so hot! Great writing, excellent tension. I loved “the avalanche of thoughts”. Awesome!
Wow, that’s a mighty steamy scene! Nice one!